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IcriedbecauseIhatetopartwithmyfriends.ButIcouldn’tdoanything,theywereuseless.WhatIcouldwaswipethetearsaway,packmybagsandgowithmymom.WhenIcametoBeijing,Ilivedwithmycousins,thereforeIwenttoasameschoolasmycousindid,whichwasaninternationalschool,thoughIdidn’tknowanyEnglishatthattime.IthoughtalthoughIcouldn’tkeepmystudyatVenezuela,butIstillneedworkhardatnewschoolandhighachievementaward,thatwasmygoal,eventhoughIdidn’tknowhowtospeakEnglish.WhenIwenttoBCIS,Ifoundtoadoptanewenvironmentwasnotthatscary,everyonewasfriendly,andsoonIhadfriends.Afteroneyearofstayingatinternationalschool,IcouldstartspeakEnglish.TostartoffofspeakEnglishwasnoteasy,butonceyoustartspeakit,youwillfoundthatisnotdifficult.Igetusedtothatschoolagain,andIstartedjoinswimmingteam,basketballteamandalsoparticipateinthedramaplay.SometimeIevensighwithemotionthatifIdidn’tcometothatschool,Iwon’thavelotsoffunasIhavenow.IfIdidn’tcometothisschool,thenIwon’tspeakEnglishandplaybasketballasgoodasnow.Iappreciatethatmymombroughtmeback.
Frommyownexperience,itprovesthatChineseidiomthatthethingyouthinkisbadwillturntoagoodresult,butitneedstobaseonnotgiveupandworkhard.IfIdon’tworkhard,thenIwilllearnnotsomanything,Iwillfeelregretsomeday.Sothatwindclosedadoor,butdidn’tblowanotheropen.Thekeyisaboutanddependonyou.Whenonlyyouareworkhard,youcangetchanceandbethebest.Inthattimenowindcanblowsyouclose.